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prayer of the broken mother
i whispered your worth in the dark places i carried your bones in the sky far below the place where God sits and the souls of children weave star lilies in the wild after. the soft touch of fingers ghost over your eyes while you sleep and this lullaby pours from my lips a song i have sung before to different ears than yours a spell of my own making self-taught wisdom and the memory of sweeter hands lifting me from the deep this prayer is born in a place of silence and scars. oh Father, forgive me for I know the darkness well let me walk through the valley of shadows but bring this little one beneath my lullaby close against your heart.
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Marvel vs. Capcom: Modulus
Name: Modulus Gender: Male Birthplace: Dimension of electrochemical energy Hair: Green Eyes: Green Debut: Fantastic Four Vol 3 #62 (2002) Voice Actor: Jim Meskimen Bio: Originating as data from Mister Fantastic’s interdimensional notepad, Modulus was inadvertently given sentience and mobility when Franklin Richards played with the pad. Seeking to unite with Mister Fantastic as an “equal”, Modulus targeted other members of the Fantastic Four and anything else that got in his way. Intro: Modulus teleports onscreen before getting into his battle stance. Round Win Pose 1: Modulus floats in the air while spreading his arms out. Round Win Pose 2: Modulus raises his arms upward in victory. Round Win Quotes: -“Threat averted.” -“Will analyze product soon enough.” -“It will be over soon.” Victory Pose: Modulus does a ‘sitting’ pose while floating in the air. He then grabs the camera as if he’s about to corrupt it. Victory Quotes: -“I am the modulus that defines Reed Richards.” -“Now to
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Maronated
"Let's see... the A.I. interface seems to be working just fine, and the circuit board seems to be in order... Aha, here's the problem," Bulma Brief exclaimed triumphantly after finding a few wires were crossed incorrectly, the blue-haired genius having spent a good chunk of her afternoon repairing one of her company's airplanes that had recently broken down in the middle of a test flight. "Ms. Devoir, let General Xiōng Měng of the Royal Defense Army know that I repaired his biplane." "Right away, Mrs. Briefs," the voice of one of Bulma's secretaries replied through her earpiece, "by the way, you have a visitor here to see you. Shall I let her through?" "Umm... Sure, yeah, have her brought to my office," Bulma replied as she wiped the grease from her brow and went to her office. I wonder who it could be? Chi-Chi? She and I aren't supposed to be meeting up for tea until next week, though. Oh well, no time like the present, I suppose. Stepping out of her lab, where she did most of her
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A peom I wrote inspired by the phrase "the demon within".
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ImpactThis is remarkable. You are innovative with rhyme and do what a few other writers I have read [in university] did: they changed the scheme. I cannot recall however that they did this way exactly. Experimentation can be good--and fun.
From poetics, the first line of each stanza rhymes, and then very sound rhymed couplets followed. The first couplets of each stanza are what we call a"slant rhyme" popularized by Emily Dickinson in the USA some time ago. The structure is called quintet, I think, a stanza of 5 lines instead of four.
I used to write that way as student and I am pleased to see that someone-you for instance-have thought of doing it now.
The content is worthwhile too. About the darkness/monster within us. I must beware to release it. Bravo!