Wrote this for a bit of fun. Been a while since I just wrote something for the sheer heck of it. Took a dark subject and gave it a light-twist. Though didn't help my friend's kitten was eyeing up my meal as I was typing this out a few minutes back. Greedy little bugger hahaha.
hahaha i like it! i also heard it as a song in my head :D i like it in all its simplicity, and it's also very fitting for today's supposed "end of the world" :p nice job on putting a new spin on zombies!
and wow lol, the person above could have at least offered some constructive criticism to perhaps help you improve? haha. but we all have opinions i suppose. haha take care!
Thanks. Glad you got the simplicity of it. Which was my aim. Too many descriptive words and overblown imagery would have stagnated the poem somewhat. Strange that it could be a song, maybe I'm not just getting it hahaha.
Indeed, constructive criticism is more favourable than just saying you "hate" something. Opinions are all well good, but some opinions are best left to one's self at times.
yeah, you're right, keeping it simple was the best way to go imo, and i think it worked well. :) but hahaha, i dunno why either, maybe it's the rhyme scheme? it makes it easy to sing along to!
and wow lol, the person above could have at least offered some constructive criticism to perhaps help you improve? haha. but we all have opinions i suppose. haha take care!
Indeed, constructive criticism is more favourable than just saying you "hate" something. Opinions are all well good, but some opinions are best left to one's self at times.