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Iris-crested wormhole
for endless melted eons I've drifted through ether sap green and lavender nebulas altairs of amber plasma indigo pulsing densities and for the endless melted eons all I could perceive was the cold void blackness in between the hues not knowing what birthed me yet never home 'till on one bleak melted eon an iris-crested wormhole swallowed me whole and suddenly all the timespace just ceased to be for in the most alien desolate nucleus hypnotically splitting into shiny multidimensions I have found myself I have finally came home.
Literature
Crying Out To You
I didn't grow up,
In devastation,
In lies and pain,
Lost in translation,
I didn't grow up,
In this world you call hell,
I didn't grow up,
In a prison cell,
But I went through hell to die for you,
I was betrayed and whipped and torn in two,
I was all alone and you were no where in sight,
I went through hell to give you eternal life,
No matter what you believe to be true,
I promise you that this is the truth,
And I don't care if you hate me like you do,
'Cause I love you, I love you,
I didn't do drugs,
I wasn't raped or sold,
I wasn't beat by my parents,
Or left out in the cold,
I didn't grow up,
In this world you call hell
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Camp grossdom
Summer has started Jack had graduated high school instead of relaxing at home he was going to camp that came very recommended by his principal she said it he would never forget it when i went there I had the time of my life. He was all packed up the bus was here and he climbed aboard enthusiastically he even said hi to the bus driver (Sasha) gave him a grin Sasha: enjoy the ride I tell you the trip is many could take 12 hours Jack heard and he was prepared he had food that could last him the whole ride and he boarded the bus. They were some girls on the bus already Jack being a coward he didn't talk to any of them they even sitting down he could see how tall these women were he didn't think about it that much so he sat down at the back. Later more women came on soon the bus was filled with nothing but women Jack noticed he was both happy yet concerned about this while he sat in between two bottom heavy girls. Jane: hey shorty what are you doing here. Jack: I'm going to the camp like the rest of you. Belle: yes we got another one. Jack: another what? Jane: here read this it'll explain everything. Jane gave him a pamphlet regarding this camp why it wasn't what he thought it was at all. This was a camp to teach men to be slaves to their mistresses they would take the most pathetic boys to become slaves to their future wives bosses or just an ASSistant to potential successful woman and prepare those potential successful women for their future slaves. Feet training Armpit training Fart training Toilet cleaning training Chair training Tongue bath training etc... This part horrified Jack the most. "As a bonus each bus has exactly one male for the girls to practice" While still reading the other horror "activities" of this camp Jack smells a terrible odor that fills his nostrils the he sees the women of the take off their shoes and socks including the bus driver. Jane: come on loser you have to give each of us beautiful girls a nice foot rub and when we say your done you give a lick. Jane grabbed him by the back of his shirt and threw him on the floor then shoved her sweaty socks in his mouth he was too scared to spit them out so he sucked on the salty sweat of her socks. Jack crawled around the bus rubbing and licking the the disgusting soles of the women his foot rubs were loved he had tons of practice since he would give them to his mom everyday after her daily run none of them compared to her feet at all .the bus on the red light he he did the bus driver for her feet were were so wet and sweaty he couldn't get a good grip on them. So far the worse ones were Jane's they were wet she had athletes foot and not to mention she would get unsatisfied and hit Jack in the face with her foot. It has been an hour of rubbing and tasting sweaty feet Jack was getting hungry. He went to his bag to get his food but was stopped by Jane. Jane: no loser you don't eat this yet hang on. She pull out a thermos and had a devilish grin. Jane: you can't drink this it must be blessed with our essence everyone socks in here. Every one passed up their sweaty socks in Jack's thermos he forced to drink the salty liquid that was the foot sweat of every woman on this bus it was disgusting. Jane: OK now that you're fed lay down here Jack obeyed he lied down on the backseat of the bus he could feel the dampness on the part where Jane was sitting than all off a sudden Jane landed ass first onto his chest then many other women landed on the he was in agonizing pain after 30 minutes they got off him he felt a relief until the bus stopped they were in traffic and the bus driver Sasha landed her sweaty ass directly on Jack's face for another half hour and continued the bus ride She finally got off his face than Jane stood up. Jane: OK now for armpits. The women took off their shirts to reveal huge pit stains and the sweaty unshaved underarms as if the girls hadn't clean themselves in weeks now it was time for Jack to lick every single lastvone of the till they they were satisfied his mouth full of sweat and pit hair. Now it was time to eat again this they would get a sandwich and each girl wipes their ass with it for five minutes let's just say the sandwich has peanut butter on the inside and outside Jack was forced to tasted the shit of every girl it was as if they never guard of toilet paper. Jane: OK girls time for the main event what I have in my bag is chocolate not just any chocolate coco lax chocolate this stuff not only cured my moms constipation her ass couldn't shut up for months now imagine what it will to us while we are in with our little bitch who will clean our panties if we have an accident and this could be a fun game of spin the bottle who's in. The whe bus cheered everyone devoured the chocolate and already they were ready to play. To be continued.....
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Originality Technique ImpactI like how you use three of the "W" words. The rhyming helps create a very beautiful but sad and meaningful picture. Also comparing why, when, and where to the sea, the stars, and the sky. The small description of the sea brought to mind either sadness or anger. The small description of the stars brought to mind beauty and hope. when said "lie" in the second stanza it also brought to mind that the stars wren't "real" and they were just "fakes". The small description of the sky made me really think. did you mean the person was looking out of a window when she was hiding? I thought you did because of the usage of the word "outside".