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If this be my last,
I'd better scar the sordid skin,
With a blade cut flourishing fast.
I might not know where to begin,
But I'll end this loathsome life of sin.

If this be my last,
I'd better bruise the bloody bone,
With a hammer blow anguishing aghast.
I never believed this could happen,
But now here I stand with a knife sharpened.

If this be my last,
I'd better tear out the traumatic tendons,
With a scythe flash punishing past.
I could suffer so much internal pain,
But I'll always have these umbra urges again.
Wrote this poem in under ten minutes. I was busy making a coffee and I just got this in my head, so I thought I'd write it down.
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Student General Artist
This is incredibly well-written. bravo.
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Manigran Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Powerful poem. I love the last stanza the best; the line "with a scythe flash punishing past" gave me shivers.
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IceQueenAzure Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are a true poet. I congratulate your smooth style and connection with your readers.
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SaphiqueX13 Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Gruesome detail, and simplistic style. It flows well and has unique wording that fits the mental images perfectly... Just as long as this isn't your last. :)
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Icechrystalheart Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student Writer
Very well written.
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NemoX7 Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah thanks.
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Icechrystalheart Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Writer
Your very welcome
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