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Literature
*Distant Vision*
Inconceivable looking at sky
How distant galaxies exist.
Vision soft, mackeral cloud fleeting
Ripples like waves undulate.
Far beyond my sight and yours
Our universe expands and waits.
Thoughts spiral out of control
When night invades the sky.
Celestial bodies, silver glimmer
Lanterns to who knows where.
Stepping stones to distant places
Where aspiring minds do dwell.
2013 Delice1941
1st July2013
9th February2014
Literature
Faults and Regrets
Words are but a loss
When your mind
Is on a wander
Dreaming,
Caressing fantasies -
Simple fables,
But do we ever learn?
Love, hatred,
Contrast;
Muse.
We may win,
But we always
Lose.
Recover from mistakes
Repeat, repeat,
End -
Endless cycles
That are
To our routine
And yet,
What are words
But a loss
To wandering minds?
Where they go,
Where they hide -
What they see,
What they felt -
And our muse
Continues,
Always the same
Memory,
But always
A different
Time ~
Literature
Betrayal
I gasp for air from all the lies
You force down my throat
And burn my lungs
The bitterness, the bile of betrayal,
The taste it burns my tongue
You spoke of sweet promises, you never would fulfill
You left me with wounds that may never heal.
I wish I had seen who you are in disguise,
before I let you leave me shattered with all of your lies.
You never tried to understand
That's why you let go of my hand
I miss the presence of your rose petals
But I prefer the absence of your thorns
I miss the presence of your golden soothing voice
But prefer the lack of wounds your silver tongue had torn
I am in stoic bliss with your ghost no longer her
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Poem no. 1046. Originally written as an entry to Writing-Rampage's contest "It's Time to Write Prose/Poetry!" fav.me/d7kt6xo However, I found out I went over the required limit and I didn't want to revise the piece to fit the limit.
The prompt I went with was "I would rather...".
The prompt I went with was "I would rather...".
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What drew me right in was the fruit concept! (not sure why? but it did!)
I liked several of the phrases you used, like: "vomits fire", "seduced me stupid", and "citrus cascade". Great imagery! I also liked the "sins" you used.
I just thought it was a bit long and there were just a few words I didn't understand.
I really enjoyed it overall!
I liked several of the phrases you used, like: "vomits fire", "seduced me stupid", and "citrus cascade". Great imagery! I also liked the "sins" you used.
I just thought it was a bit long and there were just a few words I didn't understand.
I really enjoyed it overall!