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This poem is called Internal because it's about someone talking to themself in a mirror. At first it might seem it's about someone talking about someone else.
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Starting each stanza with a question addressed to a person had a big impact on me. I must say that I am impressed in the way you made up the structure of the poem and how you created the forms and the lines and how you placed the rhetorical questions, all along.
Originality is a strong point in the poem, which, combined with impact, makes the reader totally aware of your feelings.
The way you expressed feelings through lines is beyond words and you are indeed talented. The technique and vision also are a strong point to talk about, especially -as mentioned before- these incredible questions
Good poem, well written!