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Alastor TF/AP/MC
Dylan was in his house and he saw on the youtube the hazbin hotel pilot, and then an hole on his down and he has fall to the hell and he don't even know where is he "where am i? what is this place?" he asked "hello? is everyone here? damn i don't even know whe- wait what is this?" when he saw long thing who even like a microphone when he touched and his body has hurted so bad and getting change. his skin getting little darked, as his height grew and making him round tall, his, black glove formed on his hand and his jacket gets grew longer and gets into a red coat with inside a red dress shirt, a bowtie formed onto his shirt, his pants gets darked and became dark red dress pants,his shoes gets became into black dress shoes, as his hair became red and some ears-like hair and black horns grew on his head as his age gets progressed to 30s-40s years old, his teeth get sharpe and became yellow as his eyes became red. "OH GOD!!" yelled Dylan as he looks shocked when he saw his new demon
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Interactive TG Shorts - Cute Girl Gamer 5
This branches into two storylines, with the upcoming alternate one marked with an A ===== The Tall and Short Problems of a Cute Gamer Girl [5] [5a] (Alternate) Rachel told herself several times she was going to wake up her husband/wife and spill the beans about everything. The seat is screwed up. And her parents now thought that she was always Giselle. But she knew that would be a lousy thing to wake her up with. At the same time, she knew she would be desperately disappointed if she slept through not only the early afternoon but until dinner. All those lost opportunities for work. Of course, any person would understand with what she had gone through in less than a day. Peeking through the doorway into the hallway at the couch, she saw Herschel and Giselle both curled up and snoozing. She would definitely tell her. But not yet. She had that video to edit to release on the weekend and she had to take a ton of presentation pics and upload them, and they still had the website work
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Fremder
Und die Löwenzahnblüten leuchten sanft im Morgentau des erwachenden Tages vertraute Vogelstimmen begrüßen die ersten Schmetterlingsflüge sind Lachen in fremder Seele. Und Veilchenblau versteckt sich zart im Frühlingsgrün der atmenden Erde vergessene Nebelspinnen weben der Einsamkeit wärmende Stille sind Tränen von fremder Seele. Und Heckenröschen rot spielt mit Regenbogenfarben Träume bauen längst geschriebene Märchen aus alten Zeiten tanzen, tanzen sind Bilder fremder Seele. Und Nelkenblüten schwarz schmiegt sich auf Liebe wartend an Kindeshand schweigende Rufe leuchtender Augen lassen Sonnen wie Ewigkeit im Fluß des Lebens entstehen sind Atem fremder Seele und ich, ich verstumme verneige mich verneige mich voll mit Demut vor dir, Fremder der du da Leben heißt. © OC
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This poem is called Internal because it's about someone talking to themself in a mirror. At first it might seem it's about someone talking about someone else.
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Starting each stanza with a question addressed to a person had a big impact on me. I must say that I am impressed in the way you made up the structure of the poem and how you created the forms and the lines and how you placed the rhetorical questions, all along.
Originality is a strong point in the poem, which, combined with impact, makes the reader totally aware of your feelings.
The way you expressed feelings through lines is beyond words and you are indeed talented. The technique and vision also are a strong point to talk about, especially -as mentioned before- these incredible questions
Good poem, well written!