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Finally managed to break the stalemate of my writer's block. This is something I started on my phone and completed on my laptop. I as usually wrote what came into my head and fiddled around until it made sense to me. It's basically about a blind man who's getting his future read to him. The "Forgotten Nightmare" of a past relationship gone sour and his wishes to learn if his future will be rid of the memories of this lover who previously caused him torment.

It was an annoyance to write. Trying to make sure verses in the present linked in with those in the past (in regards to what the blind man remembered of his ex-lover).
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JeffreyRebowlski Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I enjoyed the your use of metaphors reflecting on time gone by.
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RufusMisser Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Jaw Drop Emote Eye Bulge Revamp !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Many Thanks for the Inspiration.
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OneKnightsStand Dec 26, 2013  Student General Artist
I will critique this anon. It requires some time, contemplation and a dictionary.
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NemoX7 Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed. Well I will patiently wait until enough time has elapsed for your critique. Be mindful I sometimes don't use words in terms of their conventional meanings. So even if a word for example doesn't seem to fit; I included it intentionally. Just so you know.
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OneKnightsStand Jan 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Done.
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OneKnightsStand Dec 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks for telling me that.
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