A poem written around the general concept of a man with blood on his hands, wishing to atone for his crime. I would have uploaded this yesterday, but something cropped up that demanded my attention. Anyway here it is all finished.
Some of the commas there seem a bit superfluous to me, but otherwise I think this is well written. I love your choice of words, and it's certainly an interesting theme.
I'm dazzled by the language. Your use of alliteration impresses me greatly. ^^
I'ts very nice.