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(1) Wedgie RPG
After work, I always opted to stay home as opposed to going out with my colleagues. Despite the frequent invitations to have a good time and unwind, nothing truly relaxed me more than wedgies. I looked forward to arriving home after work just to spend time with myself thinking of new scenarios where my panties were rammed up my butt. However that was also the problem - I have only ever been by myself. After all this time, I had exhausted virtually every scenario I could think of and I started to pine for the days when the thrill of wedgies was at its peak. [Requirements met. Program initializing. Welcome Player 1 to the Wedge RPG] [Stats: Thrill: 1, Silence: 0, Endurance: 0, Stretch: 0, Exhibitionist: 0] [Thrill modifies the user’s overall experience with wedgies.] [Silence modifies the user’s tolerance for being gagged.] [Endurance modifies the user’s tenacity to longer wedgies] [Stretch modifies the user’s elasticity of the panties they are wearing.] [Exhibitionist modifies the
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Hot Big Girls Fart Bubbly
Author’s Note: Am in the mood to write somethin terrible. Treat this however ya want. It was a day sort of day when Sabrina comes around the block. Boy oh boy, did she have the biggest butt of all time. I’m talking about the size of two freakin beach balls I swear! Like huuuuuuuuuuuuuge freakin watermelons! And the best part is, she’s my crush! “Hey Blake!” She says with excitement, her butt cheeks bouncing around as if it were the jelliest jello I’ve ever seen! One thing leads to another and her butt is in my face. Sabrina’s butt was so big thtat my face is about the size of ant compared to the sun.
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Forced Into Existence
No matter how filthy the circumstances are, there's a staggering chance That the weight of life will crush the weight of gratitude Being dragged into a world that the hypocrites say is tightly gripped by Satan Is nothing more than a ripoff, an unsolicited trial, an infectious curse, the reason Why humanity can't mingle with itself-- not in the way that replaces suicidal flowers With their incontrovertible sunshine, unleashing the secrets scattered throughout A seemingly and gorgeously meaningless universe There have always been reasons to barricade the entrance to our home, but so many See this place as a brutal blessing that chokes children and bargains with poverty to Unlock the absurd privilege to be imprisoned in an unnatural sky This realm is a fucking shithole, a boiling cesspool that looks like a mixture of Every bodily fluid from every organism that has ever existed, yet the winged ones Expect finances, homicide, abuse, rape, and nature's desire to kill us to merely Distract
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The title comes from a line from the song "Chop Suey!" by System Of A Down. The poem itself I wrote during a bad headache and so I might not have been 100% when I wrote it.
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Originality Technique Impactthis is really very good. I liked the amount of imagery. I could really feel that bit of remorse. and I like how each stanza is a story of it's own. I also liked how, although it followed a set pattern, it wasn't repetitive. the alliteration sounded really cool, too and I loved the way that you used long words that most people don't. it shows a large vocabulary and proves your writing skill. the onomatopoeia that you used in each stanza made the poem feel real, as if you were there watching this happen. I must say "truly brilliant work". to be honest the thing that drew me in was the title "self righteous suicide. it reminded me of "chop suey" XP as for down sides. well, I don't have any to directly point out, but nothing is perfect. so, keep improving.