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If you could cut deep into my bearable blood,
Would you see it as a circuitry of veins,
Madly manifesting itself across blackened bones?
But I won't forget when it rains all the pain,
Salivating from scarlet sides of that knife of wood.

If you could slash hard into my subtle skin,
Would you know it to be a mimicry of silicon,
Insanely invigorating itself over mildewed muscles?
But I won't forget when it snows all the blows,
Impacting from emerald edges of that dagger of sin.

If you could claw slowly into my pitiable plastic,
Would you find it more than a secrecy of nerves,
Wildly wasting itself under obliterated organs?
But I won't forget when it hails all the flails,
Singing from crimson curves of those talons of static.
A dark poem about a cyborg being tortured.
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:iconcaptinstarzi:
CaptinStarzi Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is gorgeous...
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:iconnemox7:
NemoX7 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. What did you like about it?
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DoveThunder Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
Riveting.
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:iconnemox7:
NemoX7 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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DoveThunder Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
You're welcome.
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:iconmichel-le-fou:
Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Professional Writer
You are really doing great! Will critique soon.
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:iconnemox7:
NemoX7 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I look forward to yet another critique. Thanks.
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