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I like to see you smile,
Just for a week or a while,
You don't need to bear teeth,
Pure as white winter snow,
Because this heartache I know.

I like to see you smile,
Just for a moment or a mile,
There's no reason to suffer,
Weeping those turquoise tears,
Because of those aches of yesteryears.
Last poem before bed.

Update</u> I decided to have a nosy through some of my old poems and I thought I'd share this one around. It's a simplistic two stanza poem back from November 2011. Feels like I only wrote this yesterday.
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:iconohmygoskjackfrost:
ohmygoskjackfrost Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Dancing Buizel 
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:iconnemox7:
NemoX7 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014   Writer
Thank you. That's a fine looking buizel you got there. :)
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:iconohmygoskjackfrost:
ohmygoskjackfrost Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Buizel: i know.
Dancing Buizel Dancing Buizel Dancing Buizel 
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Ashbrie13 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student General Artist
this is really well written, good job xD
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
Nice :3
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Erin-Cobra Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so lovely - it's quite different from your normal poems, sounds straight from the heart.
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NemoX7 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013   Writer
This is actually an old poem of mine. It hearkens back to my formative days of writing poetry. Since a lot of people usually don't bother to check out my earlier works back from 2011 and 2012 I decided to submit some of these older poems to groups to see if they would garner any attention. But thanks anyway I appreciate your comment very much. 
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WhiteHeartFlame Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this.  It's simple and heartfelt.  ^^
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