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A poem about the moment you meet someone you fancy, but are too shy to say hello.
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Sometimes we lack the courage to make things. As I wrote in a poem of mine,
"We are afraid to fight
and we are afraid to let go
And we only wish to have
What we were too scared to show."
- In Medo by Ana C.

(The message is here but it was translated so, you know what happens in translations).

The notion of fear is very real to us, even if you say it isn't on the beginning of your poem. But yes, it does stop us from so many things that it can fully stop us from being happy.
The poem is well written, it's very real (we can all relate to that) and it's beautiful in its whole. It's also very full with meaning.