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Wrote this in half an hour. Basically was reading up about the Battle of Thermopylae and of course I came up with this. 
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Nice poem, and written only in a half an hour! :clap: I like the mirrored repetitions "Cowards!/ Warriors!/ Heroes!" - it gives off a feel of heroic poetry. It's a nice touch considering that it was the Battle of Thermopylae that inspired you.

However, since the rhyme exists but it's very irregular (which is alright, of course), you could work more on the rhythm of the lines, for the sake of the overall flow of the poem. Other than that, well done!