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Toko's Poetic Separation
Spoilers for Danganronpa 1 (Chapters 1 and 2)! This story is a continuation of Celeste’s Tragic Gamble & Kyoko’s Sugary Demise, and while it’s not necessary, I recommend reading these stories before this one! (Girls to socks) (Danganronpa 1) An air of silence befell the halls of Hope’s Peak. It’s been four whole days since the killing game’s 1st trial, and while the terrible sights witnessed during it and the investigation before were still ingrained into everyone’s heads, two people in particular - Makoto Naegi and Aoi Asahina - tried to raise everyone’s morale with their neverending optimism just a tiny bit, which, while not causing a monumental change, was still a nice disruption of the status quo of the previous few days… And yet, despite that, the building felt more lonely than ever. Nobody could put their finger on it, it’s not like anyone went missing ever since the trial ended, still, it was a unique experience… At least for those who cared - which was almost everyone
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Himiko Cleaning Rag TF (Semi-Short)
(Danganronpa) “Nyeh, so tired…” Himiko sighed idly as she entered her still-unwanted bedroom. Today sure was… something. The Ultimate Magician appreciated Tenko’s enthusiasm and willingness to learn more, but to think she’d be forced to talk about and explain magic phenomena for three hours straight? It was a miracle she didn’t pass out right there and then, it was so much work! But now, she was finally inside of her napping room, the mattress looking comfier than usual from all this talking… But wait, something wasn’t right… Why was her bed… made…? And her laundry, they were all neatly put in a pile as well! The redhead looked around in shock before noticing a tiny piece of paper with something scribbled on it… Well, ‘scribbled’ wasn’t the best word to use, as the handwriting was very fancy, and the odd note read: “You accidentally left your room open, so I decided to clean it up while I was there, hopefully you do not mind. -Kirumi” “Kirumi cleaned it all up? Even
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Sam's Flight to Babyhood - Part Three
With Sam left to get ready for her role Jess has a small mission to conduct before returning to the small woman. Then it's finally time to put the plan to the test as they go to board their plane. --- As ever I am extremely thankful to my patrons who allow me to write as much as I do :) If you have a little spare money and would like to support me and help me pay the bills then please do consider having a look at my Patreon page. I post an update every 4-5 days and patrons get access to everything I write one week before the rest of the world. Also, for $10 a month you can get access to Patreon exclusive stories! I have 40 STORIES AVAILABLE FOR $10 patrons that you can read right away with more posted regularly! https://www.patreon.com/Elfy88 --- Jess moved quickly away from the bathroom door. She had a couple of very important tasks to do whilst Sam was distracted and she knew she only had a few minutes at best. She saw the kindly old security guard at the baggage area and
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Wrote this last week, haven't had the time of late to write much or submit anything.
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Vision Originality Technique ImpactGood rhyme pattern,I have seen so many that used rhymed couplets like children's nursery stuff and I have critiqued only a few. You and I share a skill at blank or slant rhyme. Glad to see that.
About the scheme, it was definitely original and well-constructed. Your tone is rather sarcastic though, especially when you stipulate that you would prefer to leave rather than to surrender; but who knows? Maybe many people are that way nowadays?
You did one more thing that i liked: you looked at the three words that may really be hard to say. I often hear that Sorry seems so hard to say. Very interesting material. Congratulations and thank you for writing a change.