Took me longer to write this than my last one. My aim in this was mainly to describe a story loosely without reusing words a second time. I believe I may write a sequel in the future.
I absolutely love the repetitive structure of this poem, tho I must say it is kinda long, and that might make it a bit boring for some readers. I think the story is extremely interesting, but that a sequel might break the ole' tale feeling a bit. Definitely inspiring! ♥
Absolutely loved it, however in stanza four; you rhyme grasp with grasp...kind of stretches the word a little thin but that's just picking at little things.
All in all, completely wonderful read; nicely done.
I like the contrast between the two figures, both are very different yet it is with such difference that they come together.
A beautiful piece indeed
All in all, completely wonderful read; nicely done.