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A random poem that came about actually as a request by a friend of mine, Roxy. She recently got her first tattoo, two stars on her wrist and she said to me that her wrist was scabby and so I replied "The stars are scabby tonight I see?" and next thing she says I should write a poem on that and that's what I did.

I showed it to my friend after each verse and this what she said to me. "To me it seems like it's about someone who has her own pains but trying her best to find beauty in negative spaces like scabby stars... beautiful underneath the scabby exterior."

I was simply writing off the top of my head, but somehow she found a deep meaning in the context. I'm actually quite pleased with how this turned out. 
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You probably read the thesaurus like I do, great word choice. I love the flow in this. It feels really natural like it comes off the tip of your tongue.

Sounds like someone hurt you and this story invoked you and allowed you to release it.